Developmental Editing

What it is

An academic developmental edit includes an initial round of reading, during which I take careful notes on all the big-picture elements that are helping or hindering your work at both the book-level and chapter-level. That includes attention to argument, narrative flow, organization of evidence, cohesion, voice, and overall outcomes. I also consider your chosen readership and your goals, to see if you are on track to successfully meet them.

Then, in a second round of reading, I will go into the text and leave you questions, comments, suggestions, and generative challenges in the margins, to help you along the path to revision. Depending on your preferences, I may also relocate text to fix issues with organization or tweak topic/transitional sentences that are key to your argument’s flow.

Finally, I will draft an editorial report detailing all my revision suggestions. When appropriate, I also provide a proposed new outline for the text.

When it’s helpful

I most often provide this service to authors who are looking for deep, hands-on developmental assistance, especially in the following situations:

  • when you need hands-on brainstorming, generative critique, argument development, organization assistance, and paragraph-level feedback on a project at any stage in its formation
  • when you need a detailed and specific set of recommendations on a revised dissertation or manuscript, before you begin submitting to publishers
  • when you need a detailed and specific set of recommendations on how to incorporate peer review feedback and revision requests as part of the manuscript publishing process

How much it costs

$250 + $.06-$.10/wd after 5k words

The range per word reflects the variety of texts I look at, whether or not they use my particular fields of expertise, how much work they’ll require, and whether an author is paying out of pocket or through their institution. I also use that range to affect a sliding scale based on academic rank and access to research pools.